NickCog24,

I'm wondering about a couple of the slash chord choices.

Gb∆7/Eb is functionally Ebm9. Ebo7/Ab is functionally Ab7b9.

There are differing opinions about slash chords. My personal taste is that slash chords are best reserved for when either a bass note is unrelated to the chord or the bass is a chord tone other than the root.

Cheers,
Jer